The-Super-Flash-Bros's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Morphemon Duelists 1.1]

Brilliant

This was a great satirical look on those Japanese monster-trading-lets-have-fun shows. The voice acting was really well done, and the characters were original - I loved the sexually confused nemesis. Hehe, nice one.

I'm really looking forward to the sequel!

-Dim
Super Flash Bros

[Final Fantasy Day Care 1]

An excellent start!

I'm really looking forward to the later episdoes. I loved all the little touches you had in there, like the mouth waterfall.

Your graphics are really good, especially considering you're 15. Try your hardest to neaten them up a little bit (consistant line thickness and line styles) and maybe speed up the pace of the cartoon.

Nice level of detail though, and it was pretty funny.

-Dim
The Super Flash Bros

[Storybook 2: gel]

Hehehehe

Very funny stuff. Kung fu was the best! I wish I knew kung fu.

The funniest egg is when you click Gel's head through the wall and it makes the same sound as his rear did......heeheehee

So simple, fun to watch.

-Dim

[Metroid Confusion: Part 2]

Bwahaha!

Awesome! I loved the first one to bits and I was so excited watching this one. I've been playing Metroid Prime 2 today actually, so I'd had my memory refreshed for all the references.

The Sailors on the Moon joke..........well, what can I say? cracked me up completely.

I gave you 9 for interactivity, because although it was a movie, you put a bunch of interactive stuff and bonus features in there. Thats what we like to see o_o

Nice 3D claws! looked a lot nicer than last time. The only thing I'd say is - the line colour for the claws was different to the arms (obviously you know this) but if you could change that, it'd look even better.

Whats next from Lesser Raven?

-Dim

[Final Fantasy Fugitive]

I really love these cartoons.

I watched all the others a while ago - I was very pleased to see a new one had come out.

Theres an innocence about these that really works with the style - I'm not sure what it is exactly, but I get the feeling that if you improved the graphics much further, it might ruin the cartoon...

Plus some of the jokes were great - the Birth Certificate one especially made me laugh.

I love the randomness of Cactuar - like when he's walking down the road and he wears a hat............why not?

excellent stuff, keep 'em coming.

-Dim

[TLoZ: Prequel of Time]

Really really great!

I think this is fantastic. I'm so pleased to see how fast you're improving - its very important that you keep producing Flash movies!
Story, voices, music, art, animation - all lovely. It was perhaps a bit awkward that your funniest joke was right near the beginning ("Whats the weak spot NOW Navi!?") but still, awesome.

All the voices were great! Saria's voice fitted really well, as did Links..............and the Deku Tree ;) very nice.

As a peice of critical analysis.........I'd say:
- Go over your spelling in the subtitles (a minor point)
- Improve your running cycle

Keep it up!

-Dim
Super Flash Bros
(voice of the Deku Tree!)

[Gaming Slacker]

"I own the Moon"

Very nicely put together! I'm always aprehensive about short Video Game movies, but I was pleasently suprised by this one! The voices were crisp and clear, the poses and animation were neat and tidy. For what it was, this was excellent. The main joke was simple, but nicely presented.

It was also really great hearing that old Sonic music again..........makes me wanna load up my Mega Drive.........

Please please please keep working with Flash!

-Dim

[Luigi the Lonesome]

Well!

someone has VERY good taste in music..........you managed to use two of the greatest Maiden songs ever written! credit to you on all your music choices.
The art was fine - nothing mega special, but you told the story succesfully and even captured some emotion with Luigi. I thought the Mario on the side of the bus was clever. Keep up the good work, and you'll get better and better.
-Dim

metallica-man-11 responds:

thanks man yer IRON MAIDEN farkn rock dont they!!! im not sure about can i play with madness being one of their best songs tho. i just put it in coz it fitted the scene well (i thought). the fallen angel is the best tho hey!!! if u watch it again look at what the microphones say at the press conference. its kinda small but thats coz its just a little "dedication" from me. hhaha

[Life, One Frame at a Time]

You know what?

I've always wanted to make something like this (i.e a cool fbf free animation with things morphing into each other, like "Sketch Dog")
But I never really had enough ideas. Your fbf is very neat actually. Admittedly morphing is easier that actually animating characters, but I reckon you could do a lot more with the skills I've seen here.
Plus its sweet to see someone making something for someone else. Keep up the fbf work! (NG needs more good fbf)

-Dim

[Halo: Combat Degraded]

Nothing wrong with it really...

It was actually quite nicely drawn. No major mistakes...the tweening was a bit static - try use easing. Also, the text at the top felt a bit weird. Maybe go for voices all the way next time, especially with Master Chief, because you don't have to do lip syncing! umm......keep working at it, cos I reckon you could produce something really nice in the future.

-Dim

Onic responds:

Thanks for reviewing our flash. I appreciate the tips on how to improve on future flash works. Yes you are right about MC, I should have voiced him the whole way do to the lack of lip syncing. Thanks for the encouragment, I will try to do better in future.
:D