Score: 8

"mmmmm......"

submission: The Bounce

date: March 3, 2005

ah.....I feel at peace. This game is so relaxing, its like going to sleep. (I mean that in a nice way)

but the controls work well and you managed to make it just hard enough to make the player feel satisfied and challenged without frustrated. I like the way it doesn't make sense.

-Dim

Score: 7

"An excellent start!"

submission: Final Fantasy Day Care 1

date: February 8, 2005

I'm really looking forward to the later episdoes. I loved all the little touches you had in there, like the mouth waterfall.

Your graphics are really good, especially considering you're 15. Try your hardest to neaten them up a little bit (consistant line thickness and line styles) and maybe speed up the pace of the cartoon.

Nice level of detail though, and it was pretty funny.

-Dim
The Super Flash Bros

Score: 10

"Hehehehe"

submission: Storybook 2: gel

date: February 4, 2005

Very funny stuff. Kung fu was the best! I wish I knew kung fu.

The funniest egg is when you click Gel's head through the wall and it makes the same sound as his rear did......heeheehee

So simple, fun to watch.

-Dim

Score: 9

"Bwahaha!"

submission: Metroid Confusion: Part 2

date: December 30, 2004

Awesome! I loved the first one to bits and I was so excited watching this one. I've been playing Metroid Prime 2 today actually, so I'd had my memory refreshed for all the references.

The Sailors on the Moon joke..........well, what can I say? cracked me up completely.

I gave you 9 for interactivity, because although it was a movie, you put a bunch of interactive stuff and bonus features in there. Thats what we like to see o_o

Nice 3D claws! looked a lot nicer than last time. The only thing I'd say is - the line colour for the claws was different to the arms (obviously you know this) but if you could change that, it'd look even better.

Whats next from Lesser Raven?

-Dim

Score: 9

"I really love these cartoons."

submission: Final Fantasy Fugitive

date: December 29, 2004

I watched all the others a while ago - I was very pleased to see a new one had come out.

Theres an innocence about these that really works with the style - I'm not sure what it is exactly, but I get the feeling that if you improved the graphics much further, it might ruin the cartoon...

Plus some of the jokes were great - the Birth Certificate one especially made me laugh.

I love the randomness of Cactuar - like when he's walking down the road and he wears a hat............why not?

excellent stuff, keep 'em coming.

-Dim

Score: 5

"Hmmmm......."

submission: DeleteRE04

date: December 6, 2004

It seems to me, all you've got so far, is a vision, and a great taste in music.

You need to spend more time on your graphics....the characters looked nice enough, but they didn't really move.....Also, the text speak is tedious. If you really don't want to do voices (I'd really encourage them), then at least make the text clearer by putting it in boxes (see countless RPGs)

You've got some potential it seems, but you need to think more about how to improve the presentation.

Also, yeah.......it was a bit short. Try stringing lots of jokes together. You don't have to have a story, just try and make it more exciting by having a few different things in there.

Keep working at it, you're bound to improve with time and experience.

-Dim (Decline creator)

Score: 8

"Really really great!"

submission: TLoZ: Prequel of Time

date: December 1, 2004

I think this is fantastic. I'm so pleased to see how fast you're improving - its very important that you keep producing Flash movies!
Story, voices, music, art, animation - all lovely. It was perhaps a bit awkward that your funniest joke was right near the beginning ("Whats the weak spot NOW Navi!?") but still, awesome.

All the voices were great! Saria's voice fitted really well, as did Links..............and the Deku Tree ;) very nice.

As a peice of critical analysis.........I'd say:
- Go over your spelling in the subtitles (a minor point)
- Improve your running cycle

Keep it up!

-Dim
Super Flash Bros
(voice of the Deku Tree!)

Score: 7

""I own the Moon""

submission: Gaming Slacker

date: November 23, 2004

Very nicely put together! I'm always aprehensive about short Video Game movies, but I was pleasently suprised by this one! The voices were crisp and clear, the poses and animation were neat and tidy. For what it was, this was excellent. The main joke was simple, but nicely presented.

It was also really great hearing that old Sonic music again..........makes me wanna load up my Mega Drive.........

Please please please keep working with Flash!

-Dim

Score: 7

"Well!"

submission: Luigi the Lonesome

date: November 20, 2004

someone has VERY good taste in music..........you managed to use two of the greatest Maiden songs ever written! credit to you on all your music choices.
The art was fine - nothing mega special, but you told the story succesfully and even captured some emotion with Luigi. I thought the Mario on the side of the bus was clever. Keep up the good work, and you'll get better and better.
-Dim

Score: 7

"You know what?"

submission: Life, One Frame at a Time

date: November 20, 2004

I've always wanted to make something like this (i.e a cool fbf free animation with things morphing into each other, like "Sketch Dog")
But I never really had enough ideas. Your fbf is very neat actually. Admittedly morphing is easier that actually animating characters, but I reckon you could do a lot more with the skills I've seen here.
Plus its sweet to see someone making something for someone else. Keep up the fbf work! (NG needs more good fbf)

-Dim